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    It wasn't me Jerrybaldy's Avatar
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    Time

    Just after dinner

    If I stop hurting you
    The pain will go away
    If I stop making things worse
    You will have a good day today.

    Before

    If I stop loving you
    You won’t understand why
    You will regret a week later
    I ever made you cry

    Now

    We were good
    Amazing


    Before

    Nothing will change

    Now

    Evertying has changed

    Five past three

    I want toast

    After

    We never meant to be.

    3am.

    If I die before I wake

    Thursday week

    Lorraine in accounts is pregnant

    1968

    I remember waving my sister goodbye

    Lunchtime

    Ham or cheese?
    HAM OR CHEESE?

    Bedtime
    I don’t want to go

    Morning
    I want to stay put

    Stop this pain
    Give it no time
    I’m hurting stop the clock


    Nothing time

    Work bathroom
    Conversation
    Work bathroom
    Converstion
    Dinner

    2.46
    Dying time
    Jesus give me more time
    More time
    A day
    An hour
    A minute
    Time for a smile
    An heroic wink

    Funeral
    Tuesday 11am

    Come along
    give thanks it isn’t you

    Before

    02/02/65

    Infinitely limited possibilities

    Tuesday 11am

    I would have been proud you showed
    Really would have

    Tuesday 11.15

    It’s getting hot in here
    So take off all your clothes.

    For those who believe,
    no explanation is necessary.
    For those who do not,
    none will suffice.

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    Love it. It's how my brain works.
    ay up

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    I loved this poem
    So Gogol-esque.
    Well done!
    Our task must be to free ourselves by widening our circle of compassion to embrace all living creatures and the whole of nature and its beauty
    ~Albert Einstein

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