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    true devotion

    winter’s fierce winds
    landscape’s embrace
    white snow blankets
    fall’s bounty

    slim pickings for feathered friends

    feeder sporting
    seeds aplenty
    magnetic attraction
    from all compass points

    wrens, sparrows, and a chickadee or two

    an obnoxious blue jay
    pushy, boisterous, rowdy
    a timid house finch
    ignores them all

    a red-coated fellow waits

    opportunity knocks
    zooms, plucks a seed
    a crimson streak, vanishes
    the northern cardinal

    again, this knightly bloke whooshes in

    he’s undeterred
    takes a choice morsel
    alights a nearby limb
    Sir Red, I dubbed thee

    this Templar visits the feeder’s cache

    day after day
    departing as
    swiftly as arriving
    to a lady cardinal, waiting

    he shares the spoils

    caring for his mate
    true devotion
    Her Ladyship
    I christen thee

    winter’s cold yields to spring’s warmth

    Sir Red’s songs proclaimed
    his presence
    his territory
    his lady love

    sunshine days and shorter nights

    nesting fever abounds
    Sir Red’s feeding forays increase
    bringing food to Her Ladyship
    brooding a clutch of eggs

    treetop acapella echoes afar

    chicks born this day
    rejoice with us, rejoice
    the bringer of life
    this lady, my love


    their season’s work now done

    together at the feeder
    still sharing
    still caring
    God’s perfect example

    summer’s last week fading

    Sir Red flies in, alone
    stays, feeds, and leaves
    Her Ladyship
    nowhere seen

    his songs have changed

    but their meaning escapes me
    what is he singing, is he singing?
    week after week
    he comes without her

    fall erupts, its full splendor on display

    wrens, sparrows, and finches galore
    but Sir Red doesn’t come any more
    was his song a lament for Her Ladyship lost?
    I think is was

    I hope he’s looking for another lady

    I miss them both
    they brought me joy and
    taught me the meaning of true devotion
    I wish him well
    Last edited by DRayVan; 07-21-2018 at 11:17 AM.

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    What a wonderful ode to nature.
    Really enjoyed it. Some of the lines written were gorgeous.
    Our task must be to free ourselves by widening our circle of compassion to embrace all living creatures and the whole of nature and its beauty
    ~Albert Einstein

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    loved it. Ted Hughey

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    "I hope he’s looking for another lady"

    I do too.

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    He is, I'm sure.

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