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    Shutter butter

    On my head, John. I was walking along
    the road. I sometimes think I am calling
    a bat a bat. I wanted to get out of Chicago.
    There was a mouse called mad Richard.
    I would like to get a job. I had no skills.
    I was good leaving. I wanted to get kisses.
    They thought I was a little bit angry. I was
    sent to Coventry. I wanted to call myself a
    happy

    JOHN!

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    confidentially pleased cacian's Avatar
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    hello edgarricerie and welcome to the forum

    shutter butter I am taking is a play on words/

    I noticed your style of writing which is unusual .
    It is like paraphrasing and there is a jump one thought to the next not necessarily related?!

    I like these lines the best

    I would like to get a job. I had no skills.
    I was good leaving. I wanted to get kisses.
    They thought I was a little bit angry. I was
    sent to Coventry. I wanted to call myself a
    happy
    well done
    and is that your name John?
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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    It wasn't me Jerrybaldy's Avatar
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    No idea what it was but I definitely enjoyed reading it.

    For those who believe,
    no explanation is necessary.
    For those who do not,
    none will suffice.

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