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    love is complicated
    and that is over stated
    and hate may need a space

    it is damming when it claims
    head over heels is to blame
    too much
    too soon
    too naive it clicked
    not much room to flick
    it goes off in a blink

    it is wrong when it complains
    strong is too plain
    it has highs and lows
    but too many were close
    it doesn't stay for long
    it doesn't have to belong
    Last edited by cacian; 07-07-2018 at 01:59 PM.
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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