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    People

    Haste ye back
    Sitting old fat cow
    In a field.
    Wild cotton hair
    Bumble bee jumpers
    Gorse bush beards
    Snorting wooly pigs
    Babbling brooks
    Sleepy velvet green
    Stone circles
    Chinese dragons
    Shimmering poppies
    Seabirds blown off course
    Pictish ruins
    Castle remains
    In the dimming
    Vanish in the mist
    Scarpa back
    To your own flow
    Before sunlight can shine through a window, the blinds must be raised - American Proverb

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    confidentially pleased cacian's Avatar
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    loving the sounds in this superb piece Delta40 .
    a great flow of word and did not expect the last line
    Last edited by cacian; 06-17-2018 at 08:06 AM.
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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    Wonderful imagery, and an easy flow. Enjoyed it.
    Our task must be to free ourselves by widening our circle of compassion to embrace all living creatures and the whole of nature and its beauty
    ~Albert Einstein

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    Nice! I like it.

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