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    Most Dreadful Day

    the day he most
    dreaded had arrived
    sorting through memories
    would not be easy

    they’d been
    so close for
    many years
    now she was gone

    and he had to move on

    he looked at her clothes
    hanging in the closet
    he remembered how
    beautiful she looked in this and that

    she never went anywhere without a “proper” outfit
    sorting through her things
    rekindled memories of
    more pleasant times

    her perfume still
    clung to her clothing,
    awakening forgotten
    memories of better times

    he held a dress in a tight embrace,
    it was a special date together
    a dress, a sweater, a top, the scent of her
    lingered and sparked fond memories

    shoes, he never understood
    why a person needed so many shoes
    scarves for every occasion
    how could he sort through them alone?

    jewelry to complement every outfit
    how she knew what to wear was a mystery to him
    makeup to accent her lush lips and highlight her blue eyes
    where did she learn this skill?

    it all had to go
    keeping it was
    too painful, but
    how could he?

    would his memories of
    her and the good times
    fade?
    he hoped not

    would the memories of the
    pain and suffering she endured
    fade?
    he hoped so

    they were the last memories of her
    they’d rocked him to his soul
    he struggled to blot them out
    but failed

    yet sorting through her things
    aroused memories of better times,
    when she was full of life,
    when they were happy together

    then he knew he could do this
    his good memories of her
    would not fade
    today was not so dreadful after all

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    Very nice poem and sentiment. My only quibble is with the word "memories" being perhaps overutilized (9).

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    A sad but lovely poem.

    and if this is something that you had to endure, then you have shared this beautifully and eloquently. Peace, K♥zzo
    Our task must be to free ourselves by widening our circle of compassion to embrace all living creatures and the whole of nature and its beauty
    ~Albert Einstein

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    I like this piece of writing, but I can't post anywhere else, for some reason everywhere else it doesn't accept my posting. What does K❤︎zzo mean?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dreamwoven View Post
    I like this piece of writing, but I can't post anywhere else, for some reason everywhere else it doesn't accept my posting. What does K❤︎zzo mean?
    Oh, that is just a 'take' on my sign-in name that I sometimes use. (Kiz_Paws … K♥z … K♥zzo) etc. My name is actually Karalynne, though.
    Our task must be to free ourselves by widening our circle of compassion to embrace all living creatures and the whole of nature and its beauty
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