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    A love poem

    Phenylethylamine

    God inflicts us with it
    when we are vulnerable
    he dresses us up for the pantomime
    and sets us upon each other like pigs
    good little pigs
    it skews our mental processes towards him
    and his way of being
    which is best for all
    he says and commands the structure of reality thusly
    why do evil acts send you down
    and good acts drive you up to him?
    he made it so
    to keep his garden clean
    we are trapped in a tyrannical philosophy
    that is failing by the day
    as hell swells and heaven rises away from us like a lost balloon
    but Phenylethylamine will save the day

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    hello there fudgetusk i had to look up the title. quite a word i have to admit.
    an excellent way of demonstrating love is a saga and it deserves its own prada me think !!
    thank you for posting.
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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    For clarity, it is the chemical that is associated with the feeling of love.

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    Quote Originally Posted by fudgetusk View Post
    Phenylethylamine

    God inflicts us with it
    when we are vulnerable
    he dresses us up for the pantomime
    and sets us upon each other like pigs
    good little pigs
    it skews our mental processes towards him
    and his way of being
    which is best for all
    he says and commands the structure of reality thusly
    why do evil acts send you down
    and good acts drive you up to him?
    he made it so
    to keep his garden clean
    we are trapped in a tyrannical philosophy
    that is failing by the day
    as hell swells and heaven rises away from us like a lost balloon
    but Phenylethylamine will save the day
    What a cool poem.
    I like the way that you weave your words.
    Enjoyed, fudge.
    Our task must be to free ourselves by widening our circle of compassion to embrace all living creatures and the whole of nature and its beauty
    ~Albert Einstein

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    Thanks guys. I don't write much poetry. Even though I've had three poems published long ago.

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    I enjoyed your poem. Iím not giving up on love though. Drug or no drug

    For those who believe,
    no explanation is necessary.
    For those who do not,
    none will suffice.

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    Love the poem. A touch of Bukowski (I keep saying this compliment lately, lots of good poets as of recent, i dig it).
    Last edited by tonywalt; Yesterday at 08:50 PM.

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    Thanks. Keep that Phenylethylamine flowing.

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