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    finest

    the splendor of nature
    it indicates
    no traitor but a treat
    to console defeat
    humans encounter in
    deceipt

    the sun shines through
    blue skies high
    so to look up
    is a feeling one
    must rev up
    to releave fed up

    and the moon
    beams through darkness
    in realms finest
    one must instigate heartless
    to reach harmless

    nature's longevity is
    to resolve
    a friendly indemnity
    if eternity is to evolve
    because
    quitting is dissolve
    Last edited by cacian; 05-10-2018 at 03:03 PM.
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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    Quote Originally Posted by cacian View Post
    the splendor of nature
    it indicates
    no traitor but a treat
    to console defeat
    humans encounter in
    deceipt

    the sun shines through
    blue skies high
    so to look up
    is a feeling one
    must rev up
    to releave fed up

    and the moon
    beams through darkness
    in realms finest
    one must instigate heartless
    to reach harmless

    nature's longevity is
    to resolve
    a friendly indemnity
    if eternity is to evolve
    because
    quitting is dissolve
    Beautiful poem cacian Personal experience shines through.
    Warmest regards Michael.

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    You get to the point, cacian!
    "You can always find something better than death."
    Jacob and Wilhelm Grimm, The Bremen Town Musicians

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    Just like you, positively beautiful.

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    Salut, ma cherie! So nice to see you again. Your poem is dazzling comme d'habitude (just the opposite of my French!)
    And this from a man in a bunny suit.

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    Kirkpatrick ,Danik,Peter and Pompey thank you so very much for the positive and lovely comments.
    Last edited by cacian; 05-12-2018 at 11:41 AM.
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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