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    Is it really You?

    The wind fans the grass,like a
    thousand tiny fingers,the
    fragrance of the dew all
    around us it lingers
    Is it really you?

    A rainbow arches high above
    a dim reminder of forgotten
    love.
    Is it really you?

    A shaft of sunlight on a
    spiders web
    lonely feelings, begin to ebb
    Is it really you?

    The cawing of a winters crow
    spotting food on the frozen
    ground below
    Is it really you?

    Warmest regards Michael.

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    This is very nice. Thank you, Michael

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dreamwoven View Post
    This is very nice. Thank you, Michael
    Thanks for your kind words.
    Regards Michael.

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    I enjoyed reading. Hoping you is a person and not some useless god.

    For those who believe,
    no explanation is necessary.
    For those who do not,
    none will suffice.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jerrybaldy View Post
    I enjoyed reading. Hoping you is a person and not some useless god.
    Yes I am a real being Jerrybaldy, and thanks for liking my poem,I was a person for most of my life, then discovered a living soul within.

    Warmest regards Michael.

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    Quote Originally Posted by M Kirkpatrick View Post
    The wind fans the grass,like a
    thousand tiny fingers,the
    fragrance of the dew all
    around us it lingers
    Is it really you?

    A rainbow arches high above
    a dim reminder of forgotten
    love.
    Is it really you?

    A shaft of sunlight on a
    spiders web
    lonely feelings, begin to ebb
    Is it really you?

    The cawing of a winters crow
    spotting food on the frozen
    ground below
    Is it really you?

    Warmest regards Michael.
    Beautifully written.
    Our task must be to free ourselves by widening our circle of compassion to embrace all living creatures and the whole of nature and its beauty
    ~Albert Einstein

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    Thanks again kiz paws, you make my day brighter with your interest.

    Warmest regards Michael.

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    Exquisite

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    Quote Originally Posted by tonywalt View Post
    Exquisite
    Many thanks for your kind word, better than saying its absurd!

    Warmest regards michael.

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