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    Love so Close

    Love is something to die for.
    Love is our salvation against all those who would strip us of our happiness.
    We want to share it, SHOUT IT AND TELL EVERYONE.
    WE NEED IT, CRAVE IT, RAGE FOR IT.
    In the end, our fear triumphs.
    The love is gone.
    Only regret remains, with a sinister grin.
    Shes gone.
    In a world so cruel that we would neglect ourselves.
    And stop ourselves from our own salvation.
    It all could've been prevented with a simple confession.
    Rejection would have been better.

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    Well done; I really liked those last two lines.
    Our task must be to free ourselves by widening our circle of compassion to embrace all living creatures and the whole of nature and its beauty
    ~Albert Einstein

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