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    Shadowlight

    Pray tell your secrets only repeated to hell
    And unearth the demons
    Of your angels that fell.
    Reveal to me your inner vulnerability,
    And find within, a forgiven purity.
    Breathe in me the truth of your deeds
    To wash the sins that had you fallen upon your knees.
    Confide in whispers the screams of your soul
    Forever to echo a promise to make whole.
    Show me your darkness
    So I may show you the light
    That only those who have walked the shadows
    May receive with enlightened sight.

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    I liked this, Shadow.
    Our task must be to free ourselves by widening our circle of compassion to embrace all living creatures and the whole of nature and its beauty
    ~Albert Einstein

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    Felt it was written in the constraints of the required rhyme. It’s always an issue if the rhyme or the message is at the helm.

    For those who believe,
    no explanation is necessary.
    For those who do not,
    none will suffice.

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