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    It wasn't me Jerrybaldy's Avatar
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    Heart shaped.

    I love you with all my heart
    Every leaking ventricle,
    The caked up arteries
    Like sugar lined
    Tunnels of love,
    The heaving sexuality
    Of the pump
    Orgasmic flexing
    Monotonous
    Until it’s last.
    Aorta
    F ucking you with
    New life
    Vena cava
    Bringing it all home.
    My leaky
    Clogged up heart.
    Best of all
    My cholesterol
    Is raised
    Up high
    For
    You.
    For you. For you
    For you
    I have fatty blood for you.
    My dear.
    Lardy chip fat
    Heart shaped globules
    For you.
    Last edited by Jerrybaldy; 02-09-2018 at 03:48 AM.

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    Great poem - that's what it's all about now. Love like the Hokey Pokey x
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    Quote Originally Posted by Jerrybaldy View Post
    I love you with all my heart
    Every leaking ventricle,
    The caked up arteries
    Like sugar lined
    Tunnels of love,
    The heaving sexuality
    Of the pump
    Orgasmic flexing
    Monotonous
    Until it’s last.
    Aorta
    F ucking you with
    New life
    Vena cava
    Bringing it all home.
    My leaky
    Clogged up heart.
    Best of all
    My cholesterol
    Is raised
    Up high
    For
    You.
    For you. For you
    For you
    I have fatty blood for you.
    My dear.
    Lardy chip fat
    Heart shaped globules
    For you.
    I absolutely loved this poem.
    "They" say that all the love poems in the world have already been written and that trying to compete would be clichee....Then, along comes Jerry.
    Woo Hoo, you go!!
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    ~Albert Einstein

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    God, how I love it. The lean writing of bukowski and the talent of Jerrry

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    Nice work. A love poem and a health assessment.

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    I imagine this is a love poem to a bag of potato chips. A love affair destined to end in tragedy!

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