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    2 01 PM on Saturday Afternoon in the Caribbean

    Just 200 meters from the shore
    I am shirtless
    a flopped fish on the boat deck
    gazing at cloud patterns above

    the great sea yawns
    through another 2'oclock day
    as tourists lay at
    the water edge like cuts of cane
    waiting for transport

    the sun moves through the hours
    I close my eyes
    and listen to the sea babbling to itself

    a butterfly, with a delicate hurried look
    slapping the pages of its wings
    lands next to me and I begin to talk:

    I talk of the pleasure
    of the days
    about the sweet cup
    of the thing called life
    and how good the sun feels
    warming my shoulders

    who would have thought things would be so easy?

    suddenly the boat lurches
    and then, far off, on the shore
    the plaintive scream of a child
    an undecipherable refrain
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    Wow, you took me there, Tony.
    Beautiful imagery, and while I was lulled, I was pulled back to reality with that last stanza.
    Excellent!
    Our task must be to free ourselves by widening our circle of compassion to embrace all living creatures and the whole of nature and its beauty
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