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    I Love Him, I Love Him Not

    Maybe it was truth
    Undiluted by obligation.
    Because I felt so sure
    Tracing the sentence on his arm
    As we watched the movie filled with charm
    In that full theater.

    He voiced that declaration
    Through a whisper in my ear
    As we lay on the mattress,
    Just as tangled as our hair,
    One still unaware
    Of the invisible cursive.

    I had tucked those words under my tongue hours before,
    Waiting for a moment
    That would magnify them.
    Now I say them back,
    Make a note to keep track,
    And hope he didn’t notice the resolve they lack.
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    Lovely poem, Toffee.
    I enjoyed reading it.
    Our task must be to free ourselves by widening our circle of compassion to embrace all living creatures and the whole of nature and its beauty
    ~Albert Einstein

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    love this, great narrative

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    great read thanks for sharing

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