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    Another Year's Snow

    Another Year's Snow
    By PB (for my wife)

    We had hardly noticed, scarcely known
    The virgin frost, the seraph's breath,
    The snow sparks scattering like fragmented bone,
    Bleached immaculate, falling fresh
    From purity, like Lucifer tumbling down
    To frozen Eden's broken fields, and down and down
    to death.

    This petulance, this churlish cold, this sea
    Of white waves swept upon our black and fertile earth:
    It crept on us. It left us harsh and hard and free
    As snowbirds singing in a twigged and tiny berth,
    Against the canting wind; while in our sheltered lee
    We dare behold what we've become and still
    find you and me.
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    Very beautiful and image invoking.
    I especially loved your last phrase.
    Our task must be to free ourselves by widening our circle of compassion to embrace all living creatures and the whole of nature and its beauty
    ~Albert Einstein

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    Enjoyed very much.

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
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    I enjoyed this! Thanks, Pompey!

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    Enjoyed immensely.

    Appropriate too, as we just had our first snow last night in England.

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    Nice poem.

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    Thank you to all.

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    love the imagery

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    Thanks, Tony.

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