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    Struggle

    When I see a couple in love I think
    Isn't that great!

    When I am in love I think
    I really need my freedom

    When I am indoors writing I think
    I should be outside living

    When I am outside I think
    there is so much to write about

    When I am assertive and caught
    up in the haste of life I think
    I really need to detach from
    all this

    When I am detached I think
    I really ought to step up and
    be assertive

    When I am at a party I think
    I wish I could go home now

    When I am at home I think
    I really need to get out and
    socialize.

    I am always in pursuit
    of being somewhere else

    It is a beautiful struggle.
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    How wonderfully put ... you are SO right!
    Your last line was perfect ... well done.
    Our task must be to free ourselves by widening our circle of compassion to embrace all living creatures and the whole of nature and its beauty
    ~Albert Einstein

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    Thanks!

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