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    Diamonds and Dust

    Diamonds and Dust


    Pamela met Eddie at the Babylon.


    Although Eddie had been there a half an hour, he saw something was up the moment he entered.

    It was busy, that was obvious, but in addition there was tension, so thick you could, ‘cut it with a knife.’ The waiters and waitresses, the bus boys, security, even the bartender, were never at rest. If they weren’t taking or delivering orders or bussing tables, they purposely found other things to do. No movement was casual, no laugh or smile sincere. It was as if they were on stage, in a drama extempore. Any break in the action was not allowed in the script.

    “Where’s Pam?” said Molly.

    “With luck, she’ll be here any time now,” said Eddie. “We have to talk. It’s serious.”

    Molly’s eyes widened. “I’ll have to go upstairs, the boss wants me.”

    The bus boy, years away from being a boy, heard, gave Molly a dirty look, and clattered glasses and plates into his tub purposely.

    “Don’t mind him,” she whispered in Eddie’s ear. “They call him the Grandmaster; he thinks he’s an heir apparent. He gets sore when the boss calls for anyone but him.”

    “The boss? I’ve never seen him.”

    “He’s hardly ever here. Mister Neb has ‘other concerns’. That’s why everyone is nervous. He hires and fires at the drop of a hat. Mister Neb is… well… a shady character.”

    “A ‘slim customer’?” Eddie arched his eyebrows.

    “The slimmest.”

    Molly left and went out through the back door, and upstairs to the tower where Mr.Neb had his office. He said he enjoyed the view of ‘his city’. The bus boy followed her with his eyes, and glared at Eddie. Pamela appeared like magic and slumped down, exhausted.

    “I did it.”

    “You made it! I knew I could depend on you. You’re one of a kind.”

    Pamela was tired of Eddie’s endless schmoozing.

    “You’ve got to learn to depend on yourself, Eddie. That’s the kind of man that I want, not one that needs a mother.”

    The music was getting loud and rapid in tempo. The crowd seemed more frantic than usual, more intense and self-centered. Pam noticed a skinny blond, well-dressed, drunk, loud, surrounded by friends at a table directly across the room. Whoever she was, whatever she was, she wore dark glasses and was signing autographs on menus and napkins. For some reason, even though they weren’t through eating and drinking, the bus boy went to her table and leaned near her, like he was taking an order. His hand touched hers for a fraction of a second while the others to her right and left paid attention to a particular couple on the dance floor. To Eddie what happened was obvious, some kind of business transaction.

    “Where’s Molly?” asked Pam.

    “She’ll be back in a few; she’s upstairs talking to the boss.”

    On the first steps the music throbbed through the walls at Molly and lyrics were easily discerned.

    ‘Everybody goes out dancin,’
    Gonna dance the whole night long…’

    Half way up she couldn’t hear the words, they became a mumble. By the time she’d reached the landing near his office, the music was just a whisper, the walls so corrupted, so fat and soft, they absorbed all the good vibrations. You could fire off a gun and nobody would notice. She knocked twice, and went in. Mr. Neb was hunched over his desk doing the books. He wore a drooping mustache and his hair smoothed-back, brilliant, dark, and glossy. His face was designed with a hundred different curves and angles, tortured into a pattern of exquisite evil. Neb’s nails were lacquered and trimmed, except the one on his baby finger which was unusually long.

    “I see you’ve found the time to come up,” he said, but kept his eyes on the paper.

    “It’s pretty busy down there, I couldn’t get away.”

    He put down his pen and looking up, took her measure using his eyes as a tape. He resembled a hungry varmint regarding a piece of premium stake. He’d always had the hots for her, but her icy remarks usually cooled his steam.

    “You know, I’ve been thinking about you, Baby.”

    “I wish you wouldn’t, Mr. Neb.”

    “What?”

    “Think about me.”

    “What’s the matter?”

    “I’m liable to catch something, hanging around in your mind.”

    “There’s a rumor that you’re making money on the side,” he sneered. “And I noticed you haven’t had to hit me up for an advance on your check for a couple of weeks. You wouldn’t be taking the men customers home for piece-work now, would you?”

    “No, not on your life. Say, what is this anyway, the Inquisition?”

    Mr. Neb’s faced flushed.

    “O.K. You don’t have to get nasty. Remember who’s boss.”

    “See you remember too.”

    Mr. Neb was unfazed.

    “You need any money this week? I’ll be gone the whole weekend. You could pay me back later in Deutschmarks, Francs, Pounds Sterling, Drachmas or Kunas.”

    “Sure, Mr. Neb, or in pounds of flesh. That’s what you offered last time. I’m fine. My great aunt in Cincinnati died and sent me her diamond ring, express mail. I’m fixed.”

    Neb decided to take a different tack, and motioned Molly to the balcony overlooking the harbor.

    “Take a look. It’s it lovely?”

    Molly surveyed the harbor. White caps topped the growing waves menacing the port. Battalions of clouds streaked with lighting were assembling on the horizon, preparing to reinforce the charging wind, ready to assault the defensive walls of the ancient city. The clouds were bold and full of fire, like young SS officers with silver lightning bolts on their collars, eager to make a name for themselves, willing to write it in blood. Molly could hear the clouds rumbling from her perch, in the same way a canary is aware of a hungry cat whose belly growls with anticipation.

    “You know,” Neb took a fatherly tone, and said something every dirty old man always says when they hold a position of power, “This could all be yours. I mean, I want to make life easy for you, if you’d only cooperate.”

    ‘Oh, sh*t, here it comes again. The old give and take. He offers me one thing, and if I pass it up, he threatens to take another.’

    “No thanks. If I want a view similar to this, I can always start going to church and climb the bell tower. Their view doesn’t have so many strings attached.”

    “Not ones you can see anyway,” he spat back.

    A knock came from the door, it was the grandmaster.

    “Mister Neb, I must speak with you, and Molly is needed downstairs right away.”

    “We’ll finish this later,” said Neb, ushered her out and closed the door and locked it. Still with his face to the door he whispered something almost unintelligible.

    “The pound of flesh which I demand of her
    Is dearly bought. ‘Tis mine, and I will have it.”

    Then he turned and got back to business less personal.

    “Now what have you got for me? I’m busy.”

    ‘Well,” said Grandmaster, “The same old thing. Money. And something even more valuable.”

    “What’s that?”

    “Information.”

    There were rumors Grandmaster had been a boy genius, then a Russian Grandmaster at chess. Most highly prestigious of fellows. Lived outside Petrograd on an estate in the country with his mother and aunt. Government paid for it all. Ate what he wanted, did what he chose.

    Fame brought money, and in a typical youthful capitalist way he wasted it, over-steeping himself in wine, women, and song. After that he was a gambling addict who thought he knew all the percentages and formulas, and positive he could correlate the rules of occurrences that determined the fall of a pair of dice, the spin of a wheel, each card in a hand of cards, and predict every outcome. He indulged in risky behavior, and unprotected sex. Unfortunately, his genius bloomed early in life, and now his intellect had withered. Never again would he experience the shining moments of his younger years, or savor its tender triumphs. While living in a dingy studio next to the Babylon, the government still paid his rent, but from a different end of its benevolent spectrum, ten Kunas a week, only one step away from homeless.

    To console himself he’d bedded down with opium. Under its calming influence, his flame of youth had dwindled to passive dying embers, hardly enough to keep the man warm. At one time he was able to look ahead, predict the future, and plan his future moves. But now he spent more time falling behind, lost in reverie. Addicted to his poisoned dreams, unwilling to escape, he preferred to clutch at fantasy with crippled hands that had lost their grip on reality. Sometimes geniuses are so focused on genius they lose sight of their limitations.

    “I can wait for news. In the meantime we’ve received a new shipment. One from Chile and one from Bangkok. Let’s get down to business.”

    Mr. Neb turned towards a portrait of the Madonna. Her eyes did not show, just their lashes, and she wore a blue cowl over her hair. She possessed a sad expression, eyes downcast, face tender and delicate, patient, the face of a sainted mother who was more than any saint.

    “It’s a wonderful painting of Mary.”
    .
    “Yes, I agree, it’s quite valuable.”

    Mr. Neb stood within arm’s length of the frame and after making the sign of the cross, he reached out and opened the hinged frame like a swinging door in a saloon. Inside was a safe, and with a twist left and right it was open. There were bags stacked against either wall. He took one from each side, avoiding their protection in the middle, and placed them on Grandmaster’s portion of his desk. At the same time Grandmaster plopped down a stack of Croatian Kunas and another of American greenbacks.

    “One white, one black, isn’t it?”

    “Yes, that will do.”

    “For now.”

    “Yes…for now, always for now.”

    Mr. Neb picked up the stacks of paper and put them in the safe.

    “You know, the white is the very latest product. Our associates in Chile.”

    “It doesn’t bother you that they’re all ex-Nazis?”

    “Not in the least. Besides, they owe me a few favors. I was one of the agents who worked for Odessa, in charge of the local ratlines. I find it best to no longer think of them as war criminals, but rather as struggling chemists in need of a market. One should always keep labels up to date.”

    “That’s a good way to look at it. I can never fault Germans when it comes to their knowledge of chemistry. You know it’s extremely busy down stairs tonight. I’m simply dragging. I have much work to do for you. Can I do a small sample here? It would perk up your best pair of eyes and ears immensely.”

    “Only a little, you know how you get.”

    “I’ll control myself. I know what I’m doing.”

    “Got your knife?”

    “Naturally.”

    Grandmaster took out a pearl-handled switchblade he got in Damascus. Its bright metal gleamed in the light. Both sides of its polished blade were nasty sharp and cut both ways.

    He held the glassine bag firmly to the table like a pig and poked it with the tip. Releasing the bag with one hand he maneuvered the blade under his nose. Taking his free hand he placed the tip of his middle finger over one of his nostrils. With the other he made a quick sniff. The substance disappeared.

    “Nice, no sting.”

    “Yes, I believe it is extremely clean. These German’s know what they’re doing.”

    Grandmaster reached for the bag to put it away. Neb caught him, and pinning his wrist to the desk with one hand, with his free hand he scooped deftly with his long finger nail and imitated the grandmaster’s action. The strength in his hands was insane.

    “You don’t mind? I thought you’d never offer, "Neb said and loosened his grip.

    “Why should I? You’re the boss.”

    “Yes,” said Neb, and looking up at a cloud that wasn’t there, decided, “It seems that I am.”

    He put the tip of nail in his mouth and tasted it. To get down to business, grown men think of coffee, youngsters think of Coke or Pepsi fizzing its way down your throat. But to Neb’s way of thinking,

    ‘This is the only pause that truly refreshes.’

    His eyes were dilating already, as if they were hungry. “Well, what about the information? What have you?”

    “Someone has a hand in your till, a trusted employee.”

    “Is that so?”

    “It’s costing you quite a pile. I’ve been keeping watch, it’s been happening almost on a daily basis.”

    At the same time the substance was snapping the synapses in Neb’s brain, the same thing was happening to Grandmaster, and he was getting bolder with each passing second. He was eager to dish out information, but to feed Neb by the teaspoon full, rather than overload his plate.

    “I say almost because the only days it doesn’t seem to happen, are on Molly’s days off. I have the figures right here.”
    He patted his pocket.

    “The b*tch! In knew she was up to something.”

    Neb started to pace. With each step he grew more disturbed.

    “I give her a job and help her out and what do I get? Nothing but disrespect!”

    He stopped in front of the balcony and looked out. The sky was dark and brooding. Thunder crashed in the distance and rain began to fall. Soon it was pouring down with a vengeance, and the thunder clouds were so near they were almost on top of them. The interval between thunder and lightning was so close you couldn’t count the distance between them in seconds.

    Grandmaster saw beads of perspiration begin the form on Neb’s forehead, and noted his chest heaving, and decided to egg him on.

    “Of course I suspect some other employees have a hand in it too, but not half as much as Molly. The problem is, they’re following her example.”

    Neb started seething, his hands began to shake.

    “She never cooperates! Never gives me what I want, much less shows respect. Now the American is stupid enough to bite the hand that feeds her! Well, we’ll see. I know how to deal with her kind.”

    Neb returned to the safe. He took out a Walther PPK and then gathered up the bags of powder off the desk, one black, one white, packed all three in a shaving kit bag he located in the desk drawer, then shoved it towards Grandmaster.

    “Take care of her for me,” he suggested.

    “You mean?”

    “I mean… take care of the b*tch.”

    He patted the shaving kit affectionately, and as he did his voice took on a tone of fatherly advice.

    “Show initiative. Demonstrate ambition. I know you can do it. I have faith in your abilities. Once a grandmaster always a grandmaster. We both believe that, don’t we?”

    “I’ve always believed in good works buying redemption. Your wish, kind sir, is my command.”

    When Grandmaster was outside the office door he hesitated to go down the stairs. He wanted to take a moment to savor his triumph of planning, and marvel at its execution. Now each and every penny he stole from his master was accounted for, and blamed on his favorite scapegoat, the American. He wasn’t just at the top of the stairway; he was on top of the world.

    ©Steven Hunley 2013

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    Absolutely brilliant.
    I sure did not expect that last paragraph, Steven!
    As always, you leave the audience wanting MORE!
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    Well, I hope Molly turns the table on him. She might use a method that is currently very popular in Brasil: recording revealing conversations and making use of them.
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    Ill befalls them all so he gets what's coming to him.

    Downstairs the party raged on. Eddie and Pamela’s heads were close because the music was so loud they couldn’t hear each other without shouting.

    “Where’s Molly? She should be back by now. Did you tell her about the police?”

    “Not yet. There wasn’t time.”'

    “Not enough time? Eddie, how long have you been here?”

    “About half an hour, but it’s frantic and only saw Molly just now. She’ll be back.”

    “You saw her but you didn’t say anything…” Pamela trailed off, set her lips, and shook her head.

    “Eddie, I follow you to the ends of the earth and this is how it turns out. You’ve got to get serious about this. You have no idea the trouble we’re in. You can’t just ignore it. It’s time for you to step up to the plate.”

    Eddie couldn’t see past the present, and said nothing in return.

    “Eddie, I don’t like what you’ve become.”

    “Something’s up,” Eddie admitted, “Or something’s about to come down. See how everyone’s acting?”

    “Forget the money, Eddie. Let’s just get out.”

    “Just look at them!”

    Pam scanned the room. Everyone was moving or talking or dancing. More than just gay, they were frenzied. The dancing, at one time a purely social pursuit, had taken on a more tribal quality. It was as if the dancers, by their attitudes and body language, had blocked the uninitiated out, or restricted them to the bars and tables. To keep the laymen on their side of the barrier, a couple of girls barked like a dog. A waiter crashed a plate of food on the floor, while a fat woman bellowed her love to a man at the bar getting drunk. A couple of girls started cackling with laughter. A drunk gay young blade with red hair stood up on a chair and started to crow. With all the variety of sound and movement, the crowd was more like a farmyard of nervous animals before an earthquake, rather than dancers going crazy on a wooden floor.

    The skinny blond autograph signer ran off to the women’s room clutching her purse.

    Pamela started to feel the energy herself. She didn’t like how it felt. The crowd was under a spell and she felt immune, but it was as if the Babylon was a microbe attacking her system, making itself noticed all the same.

    “I feel uncomfortable,” she shouted, “I’m going to the little girls’ room. Grab Molly when she comes back, and whatever you do, don’t let go.”

    Outside was no better than inside, in fact it was worse. The wind drove the rain with so much ferocity that grown men could not cross the square without being blown away. Trees were uprooted and lay overturned on sidewalks and streets. Lightning crashed in the heavens and visited the earth, setting fire to the bushes and untended grass inside the city walls. Perched high above the rooftops, the only recognizable things were lofty church spires and the cross of Old Darko, glistening against the night, highest of them all.

    Inside Eddie was mesmerized by patterns on the surface of his water glass. As the beat reverberated, it struck the glass, forcing concentric circles to converge on the center. Then there was a snap and a crack, and the pattern increased tenfold. Eddie placed his hand flat on the table. It was shaking. The mirrored ball above started to sway, the spotlight that fed it sparked, fell, and hung lose by one wire. Extreme shaking forced the needle on the turntable to skip off the record, compelling the tone arm to scrape mercilessly on the vinyl. The crowd grew silent and listened.

    Then the violent rumbling began in earnest.

    Old rotten bricks lost their grip on each other and turned to dust. The floor started to roll like a deck of a boat in a storm. A young woman screamed when the walls collapsed. Clouds of dust flew from the shaking rafters and dozens, hundreds of bricks and splinters and beams fell down smashing the dancers and patrons. Unable to catch their breath, they coughed their innards out in uncontrollable spasms. White powder covered their limbs and faces, giving them a pale and deathly look as they walked like zombies through the wreckage, stunned and disoriented.

    Eddie nearly passed out under a collection of bricks the size of Manhattan in a crumpled heap. But the pain kept him alert. His forehead was torn and bleeding. He recollected a noise like a train wreck and being under a rain of bricks, plaster dusting his face, choking, and feeling he'd been pounded by Jack Johnson into fresh white meat chicken salad.


    The noise stopped.

    Next there were sirens and the high-low whining of ambulances, shouting firemen and scores of police. The voices grew faint as Eddie struggled to get up on one elbow. All he could see was clouds of smoke and dust, great beams hanging down from the ceiling split in two like matchsticks, and piles of rubble and bricks. Nothing was left of old Darko Drazan’s tower except an enormous pile of smoking bricks with broken beams poking up at different angles. It looked like black and white newsreels of Berlin after allied bombings. Then it occurred to Eddie that he was seeing in black and white, and to further obscure his vision, a trickle of warm blood, like Salome’s seventh crimson veil, gradually descended over his eyes, transforming his acute vision to an inky darkness just before he lost... his...... head.

    ***
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    Treachery lurks beyond the rubble...
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