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    The dark matter of Graduation day in years to follow

    Dark Matter - noun - Nonluminous material in the universe
    not seen by the naked eye.


    Graduation day –
    and later (with fake ID) that night:
    A hotel room, booze, trilled song!

    You raid the hotel room liquor bar!

    Some years later

    shuffling towards a cornered cubicle
    drooped in your ergonomic chair with
    caffeine to replace blood and computer to
    displace brain, there under the slow tick of
    the clock metering a motionless march.

    A business trip. Jet lag

    hotel rooms of icy paintings staring over

    nothing,

    delving days with stormy eyes
    searching
    a sea of fleshy faces and plastic convention
    name tags of lives mapped and wrapped,
    stomachs filled with free shrimp,
    clutching drink tokens ("Good for One Drink!")

    soon they are slumped on the bar - pale and
    pot bellied, like cadavers dissected in medical school.


    You retreat to the 12th floor and remember
    your hero, Siddhartha Buddha, who it
    has been said -during his brief ascetic phase,
    working in a pottery production shop, walked off
    the job one day - "Thank God I'm outta that place,"
    he murmered and then smiled - to no one in particular.

    You raid the hotel room liquor bar, then

    lay back on hard springs and
    await the unshaven jaws of dawn.
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    On the road, but not! Danik 2016's Avatar
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    I liked this poem very much. A picture in words and rythm of human emptiness.
    "I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
    Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row

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    Thanks. It was in a dark period (where much of the best stuff comes from)

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    Excellent Tony. Your use of metaphors and similes are intriguing.
    Live in the sunshine. Swim in the sea. Drink the wild air ~Ralph Waldo Emerson

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    I totally felt the disillusion.
    Very well put together, great poem.
    Our task must be to free ourselves by widening our circle of compassion to embrace all living creatures and the whole of nature and its beauty
    ~Albert Einstein

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