I wrote this story over the last month and I am looking to get some critical feedback.
Rezanoff Drivehttps://clouddweller.wordpress.com/2...ezanoff-drive/
I wrote this story over the last month and I am looking to get some critical feedback.
Rezanoff Drivehttps://clouddweller.wordpress.com/2...ezanoff-drive/
I have nothing to critical to say regarding your story.
I enjoyed it, it flowed well and I felt I could identify with the protagonist.
Well done, CD.
Our task must be to free ourselves by widening our circle of compassion to embrace all living creatures and the whole of nature and its beauty
~Albert Einstein
Thank you! I appreciate the read.
Hey, it is really a nice story... I enjoyed reading it very much. Also, I liked your recent story https://clouddweller.wordpress.com/2...7/three-poems/ which is short & sharp... thank you!
Best Regards
Roberto Romello
https://www.testree.com
Just a note to say I enjoyed the story. Great job of conveying the melancholy feelings of the character. On a side note, I also enjoyed the details concerning the church and the imaging provided.