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Last edited by lawrencelpy; 09-27-2017 at 02:12 PM. Reason: deleted
"We are all in the gutter but some of us are looking at the stars" Oscar Wilde
I absolutely LOVED your story.
Very well done indeed, bravo, my friend.
Our task must be to free ourselves by widening our circle of compassion to embrace all living creatures and the whole of nature and its beauty
~Albert Einstein
haha I have more to offer.Originally Posted by kiz_paws
I absolutely LOVED your story.
Very well done indeed, bravo, my friend.
"We are all in the gutter but some of us are looking at the stars" Oscar Wilde
Nice lesson beginning where it ends but better off.
My blog: https://frankhubeny.blog/
What exactly do you mean by better off?
Last edited by lawrencelpy; 09-15-2017 at 12:26 PM.
"We are all in the gutter but some of us are looking at the stars" Oscar Wilde
A very clever parable! Congrats!
You can´t write "citizen" without "z". So when "z" is banned, citizenship is also banished.
Last edited by Danik 2016; 09-15-2017 at 05:06 PM.
"I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row
Excellent personification of a very original idea, lawrencelpy! One of my favorite lines was "I am no longer arrogant. I accept X, Y and Z. I especially love Y, as I love you." Your first paragraph mirrored your last paragraph...a nice tidy set of bookends to hold your "English town of citizens" together.
Live in the sunshine. Swim in the sea. Drink the wild air ~Ralph Waldo Emerson
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