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    A Love Game # 31

    HAIR OF AMBER

    Hair of Amber
    Falls in curls
    Over golden skin
    In perfect complement
    Like ripened corn
    In a summer field

    WHERE THE CROWNS OF ANGELS GLOW

    If I am the first of us to go
    I will wait for you in the place
    Where the crowns of Angels glow

    If I go first because I lost the fight
    I will be waiting with the Father
    Where souls emerge into the light

    If I am the first of us to go there
    I will await you in lush meadows
    Where sweet perfume fills the air

    If I go first and leave your company
    We will meet again in paradise
    And be together for all eternity

    If I am the first to go, allay your fears
    I will be waiting in the place
    Where God has banished tears

    If I go before you and we must part
    I will wait for you in heaven
    Where sweet music soothes the heart

    If I am first to go, we will meet again
    In a far better place than this
    Where God has banished pain

    If I go first through the eternal door
    You will find me with the angels
    Where suffering is no more

    If I am first to go by days or years
    You will find me waiting there
    Far beyond this vale of tears

    NEVER BE SORROWED

    Never be sorrowed
    By loveís compromise
    Donít settle for second best,
    You deserve better
    So search for the one
    Look into their heart
    And when they look back
    You will know itís safe
    To fall into their loving arms

    THAT RAINY SUNDAY

    Itís a rainy Sunday
    And Iím feeling blue
    Remembering the past
    And thinking of you

    Do you happily look back?
    Across the years
    Or do you view them
    Through bitter tears

    Do you ever think of me?
    Just once in a while
    With a furrowed brow
    Or rueful smile

    You thought our love
    Would last an eternity
    But I was quite happy
    Just to wait and see

    I just wanted us
    To enjoy the laughter
    But what you wanted
    Was happy ever after

    I loved you so much more
    Than I would ever say
    When we broke up
    On that rainy Sunday

    When you asked me
    I should have said
    ďI really do love youĒ
    I just shrugged instead

    I wish I could go back
    To that rainy Sunday
    I would get on my knees
    And beg you to stay

    A SEA BREEZE BLEW THROUGH OUR HAIR

    A sea breeze blew through our hair
    As we walked along the shore line
    The waves lapped at the sand
    And sunlight glinted on the water
    It must have been a beautiful scene
    But as we walked hand in hand
    I confess I had eyes only for you
    As we strolled along the beach
    While waves lapped at the sand

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    I liked the repeated lines in WHERE THE CROWNS OF ANGELS GLOW. Nice comparison in HAIR OF AMBER between the lover and fields of corn. The other two were nice as well.

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