I liked the last two lines which made sense out of the previous lines in the poem. I interpret the message as saying our subjectivity cannot be replaced by a digital download of electrons, and I agree with that. As feedback one could ask if the lines prior to the last two can be strengthened.
Here are lines I did not understand:
When the bourgeoise life gave us lemons,
we tamed our raging hearts in battle.
Could they be strengthened?
Although I liked the idea, would a tardigrade care if there were a tsunami or not?
I liked the idea of the universe expanding in 2003 and the tailor-made rebel part.
I didn't understand these lines:
I yearn to lay waste to all the synonymous places,
incinerate the LinkedIn faces of scientists and actors
who take your name in vain.
Could this be clarified?
I don't know what the "reporters’ careers" refer to.