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  1. 03-18-2017, 04:08 PM #1
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    An Apology

    Washed up jelly fish
    on a gravel beach
    beneath
    a chalky sky.
    The plastic spade
    in my nine year old hand
    made a pudding of you.
    I apologise.
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    Quote Originally Posted by JonathanManley View Post
    Washed up jelly fish
    on a gravel beach
    beneath
    a chalky sky.
    The plastic spade
    in my nine year old hand
    made a pudding of you.
    I apologise.
    A very Haiku-like description. I like the unpretentious style of this.
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  3. 03-29-2017, 11:17 PM #3
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    Nice poem. Short style yet effective. Keep writing more.
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    Sweet regret. I've always sign posted you as one to read.

    For those who believe,
    no explanation is necessary.
    For those who do not,
    none will suffice.
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