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    An Apology

    Washed up jelly fish
    on a gravel beach
    beneath
    a chalky sky.
    The plastic spade
    in my nine year old hand
    made a pudding of you.
    I apologise.
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    Quote Originally Posted by JonathanManley View Post
    Washed up jelly fish
    on a gravel beach
    beneath
    a chalky sky.
    The plastic spade
    in my nine year old hand
    made a pudding of you.
    I apologise.
    A very Haiku-like description. I like the unpretentious style of this.

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