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    Saved by Brian Mistark first post in a while

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    Second best never first that was the truth of love
    Same difference myself I excepted this truth

    Alone together and yet never connected
    Altogether separate though love we do wish

    Very little hope to discouraged men who seek
    Virtual reality this game of love seems

    Escaped prisoner, now free released from my chains
    Emotional reasoning consumes my mind

    Deafening silence is the roaring sound of love
    Deliberate mistake love may be but not this time

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    Alone together and yet never connected.

    Deafening silence is the roaring sound of love.

    I wonder about the veracity of these lines. A compelling poem. Thank you.
    Before sunlight can shine through a window, the blinds must be raised - American Proverb

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    I am glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for reading. ��

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