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    Choices

    Here is a storm gathering
    And I wonder how thick the clouds
    Between us might be.

    What? No thunder?
    Oh, fizzley fizzley do!

    No lightning bolts in the sky
    And I wonder if love
    Ever struck us down.

    You a constant shower
    Oh, drizzley drizzley do!

    Heavy rain on my parade
    And I wonder if it promotes
    New growth.

    Here I stand in puddles.
    Oh, grizzley grizzley do!

    Then I skip, splash, laugh
    Along my side of the street.
    Before sunlight can shine through a window, the blinds must be raised - American Proverb

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    I like the spirit of the poem. Great to see you post again!
    "I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
    Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row

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    Nice pattern with the frizzley, drizzley and grizzley dividers. The part about love ever striking us down was pretty good. We don't really want lightning to strike us down, but if love doesn't strike us down maybe we have missed too much.

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    beautifully expressed
    a charming piece full of fun!!!
    thank you for posting and nice to see you around Delta40
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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    Missed this somehow.

    Enjoyed.

    I dislike contention, and change... New growth not withstanding.

    Hoping your protagonist fares well.

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
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    what if I were to bare my soul
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    Thanks everyone. It is my hope to one day stumble across a valley of expression where I might dance, sing and swing from its trees!
    Before sunlight can shine through a window, the blinds must be raised - American Proverb

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