Hi there, I understand that this is a highly sophisticated forum and I apologise beforehand if this query is not posted in the right section.
I've been trying to write a sentence as part of a short bio description, I've spent quite some time perfecting it, yet I just can't get this one sentence right. That's why I decided to ask the professionals, you guys . Here's the sentence:
"His integrity and high quality standards were the core principles of his business conduct, as enshrined in our company motto he adopted: ‘Esse quam videri’ – To be, rather than to seem."
I could simply say "were at the core" and move on, but I want to keep the word 'principles', then again 'standards' and 'principles' don't seem compatible. The best I came up with is:
"His integrity and commitment to quality were the core principles of his business conduct, as enshrined in our company motto he adopted: ‘Esse quam videri’ – To be, rather than to seem." However, I do use the word 'commit' in the next sentence where it fits perfectly and it's not ideal to use it here. Any ideas how to put it better guys? I look forward to your suggestions.
Here's the entire paragraph (I replaced 'committed' with 'true'):
Sir Jacob Behrens’ integrity and commitment to quality were the core principles of his business conduct, as enshrined in our company motto he adopted: ‘Esse quam videri’ – To be, rather than to seem. We remain true to the ethos once fostered by our founder and woven into the very fabric of our organisational culture. Our reputation for excellence is a reflection of that very culture, built on a tradition of trusted products, faultless service and an unwavering belief in authenticity.