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    Jona Manley JonathanManley's Avatar
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    #rip

    They might just as well look for religion
    as spill their guts
    out for all to read

    Silent prayers inside chilly cathedrals
    versus empty words
    typed on touchscreen keys

    People's profiles that make them look lost
    out in space.
    Hashtag R. I. P.

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    The idea seems interesting and the sound is nice. I just don't know if the idea is clear enough to stimulate a subjective response outside of puzzlement. For example, why are prayers like posts enough to make the comparison? They both use words and so involve subjective content. There might be something to this, but I would like to know more.

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