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    The Trigger

    Shame engulfs me
    when you say things.
    It floods my entire being
    and I am never sure
    what the trigger might be
    I'm a dirty secret
    but you know
    that I was
    a naive little girl
    squeezed and fondled
    then kissed quiet
    by old men.
    Hush now baby
    Don't cry
    Each time you leave
    I'm relieved
    but afterward
    shame continues
    to flow
    through my
    wreckage
    I flush thinking
    about you
    cringe in front
    of the mirror
    Me
    years later
    still someone's
    dirty secret
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    Uncomfortable reading in places, very well written

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    I really enjoyed the reflective nature of this poem. It is a coming to terms with the past kind of poem, even if it is a work of fiction.

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    this would be an empty place without you delta! always a treat (even though at times it's an uneasy process to follow your lines) to read you.
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    Powerful stuff

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    Thanks for the feedback.
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