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    Untitled

    let go in the darkness
    and
    fall into the light

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    I really like the simplicity of your poetry.
    And glad to see you posting, M4ngo!
    Our task must be to free ourselves by widening our circle of compassion to embrace all living creatures and the whole of nature and its beauty
    ~Albert Einstein

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    The Hope Theory

    In a grand-stillness uncertainty slips
    inspiring the moment and losing its grip—
    leaving shadows in a bucket of sun
    collapsing my thoughts left undone

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    Quote Originally Posted by kiz_paws View Post
    I really like the simplicity of your poetry.
    And glad to see you posting, M4ngo!
    Wow. Thank you!

    sorry for the late reply

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    Recipe the Feeling

    I agree,
    there is something
    particularly special
    —about you
    how else
    could you replicate
    the same feeling
    I get
    when craving
    ice cream
    in the
    middle
    of the night
    when I switch
    on the light
    to the kitchen
    and I’m greeted
    by the biggest
    cockroach
    I've ever seen

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    Fun little poem... enjoyed. Perhaps "replicate" as a noun: "a tone one or more octaves above or below the given tone."

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    who am I but a stitch in time
    what if I were to bare my soul
    would you see me origami

    7-8-2015

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    Duplicate bug... with long hairy antennae.
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    tailor

    who am I but a stitch in time
    what if I were to bare my soul
    would you see me origami

    7-8-2015

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    Quote Originally Posted by tailor STATELY View Post
    Duplicate bug... with long hairy antennae.
    Those bastids! The apache of bugs!

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    The Curtain

    silver light
    unfolds at night
    unbracing
    as you fall—
    stealing away the curtain
    your disguise
    now dripping shade
    Last edited by M4ngo; 01-24-2020 at 11:57 AM. Reason: dash correction

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    Simple and effective

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    Lovely, just lovely. Some beautiful imagery and turn of phrase here. Your haikus are delightful snippets of depth.

    In particular like sad leaves and Write my Name in Solitude

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    Thank ya’ll for the comments, much appreciated!

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    Keep at it. It's very pleasing to absorb.

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