First and Foremost: This is my first post, so I'm sorry if I'm posting in the wrong space or I'm positing something irrelevant to the forums in general.
Anyways...I've started writing a short story, and I would like to post snippets of it on this thread, overtime, as it is completed. I'm hoping someone would be able to point out any mistakes I make (i.e. ones concerning grammar) and provide feedback (i.e. on the overall quality) so I could understand what I have to do to produce a good product in time.
So, without further adieu, here is the first paragraph:
"At the time of 5:30 a.m., I was expected to be commencing the first of many preparations I had to undertake before heading to school. By the time of 5:45 a.m., I was still resting in my bed; listening to my mother repeatedly call out my name from the other room. This was a daily occurrence of mine, and I would always tell my mother that tomorrow would be different; but of course, it never was."
I would appreciate it if someone could help me out, but it's understandable if you can't or don't want to. Thank you for those who choose to help me with this process ahead of time.