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    George Steiner on Lawrence Durrell, baroque prose, and the impoverishment of English

    George Steiner, in my view, is one of the greatest literary minds ever (and is so much greater than that as well), standing alongside Rene Girard, Harold Bloom, Cynthia Ozick, Henry James, and Virginia Woolf as one of the literary luminaries of all time. He's an incredible stylist, a polymath of high wisdom, and a learned example of a dying breed, the old-fashioned, old-world intellectual.
    One of my favorite passages of his writing comes from a collection of essays on the baroque novelist Lawrence Durrell:

    But this does not mean that this jeweled and coruscated style springs full-armed from Durrell’s personal gift. He stands in a great tradition of baroque prose. In the seventeenth century, Sir Thomas Browne built sentences into lofty arches and made words ring like sonorous bells. Robert Burton, in his Anatomy of Melancholy, used the same principal device as Durrell: richness through accumulation, the marshaling of nouns and epithets into great catalogues among which the eye roves in antiquarian delight. The feverish, clarion-sounding prose of De Quincey is a direct ancestor to that of Justine. And more recently, there is the example of Conrad. In the later parts of Lord Jim and throughout The Rescue, Conrad uses words with the sumptuous exuberance of a jeweler showing off his rarest stones. Here also, language falls upon the reader’s senses like brocade.

    This baroque ideal of narrative style is, at present, in disfavor. The modern ear has been trained to the harsh, impoverished cadence and vocabulary of Hemingway. Reacting against the excesses of Victorian manner, the modern writer has made a cult of simplicity. He refines common speech but preserves its essential drabness. When comparing a page from the Alexandria novels to the practice of Hemingway or C. P. Snow or Graham Greene, one is setting a gold-spun and jeweled Byzantine mosaic next to a black-and-white photograph. One cannot judge the one by the other. But that does not signify that Durrell is a decadent show-off or that his conception of English prose is erroneous. We may be grateful that Hemingway and his innumerable imitators have made the language colder and more astringent and that they have brought back into fiction the virtue of plain force. But they have done so at a price. Contemporary English usage is incredibly thin and unimaginative. The style of politics and factual communication verges on the illiterate. Having far fewer words at our reach than had the educated man of the seventeenth and even of the late nineteenth century, we say less or say it with a blurred vagueness. Indeed, the twentieth century has seen a great retreat from the power of the word. The main energies of the mind seem directed toward other modes of ‘language,’ toward the notation of music and the symbol-world of mathematics. Whether in its advertisements, its comic-books, or its television, our culture lives by the picture rather than the word. Hence a writer like Durrell, with his Shakespearean and Joycean delight in the sheer abundance and sensuous variety of speech, may strike one as mannered or precious. But the fault lies with our impoverished sensibility.”
    — George Steiner, “Lawrence Durrell I: The Baroque Novel” (from Critical Essays on Lawrence Durrell)
    Reading and pondering over Steiner's commentary, and having been a strong admirer of the baroque, the ornate, the elaborate, and the lush in literature, I agree with Steiner. In our quest for a more concise, plain, forceful English, I think we have let ourselves be impoverished in our English, in our language. "Show don't tell" and "omit needless words" are okay in and of themselves, and they may be useful at times, but I think, like Steiner, that we have lost much of the power of the written word.

    I love visual art, and I love cinema, but I have had a strong love for the written word, which is why I do find myself more drawn to the baroque prose of masters like Nathaniel Hawthorne, Charles Dickens, Victor Hugo, Joseph Conrad, Herman Melville, Vladimir Nabokov, William Faulkner, and Cormac McCarthy. Their words read like music, like poetry, like a decorated brocade of beautiful jewels. While Ernest Hemingway is brilliant author whose stories I do like, I do find myself more drawn to the more ornate writers that Steiner speaks of. Flannery O'Connor, a comparatively plainer author than, say, Hawthorne, appeals to me a lot, not only for her "grotesque" art but also for those times where she delves into descriptive prose, ranging from either a sentence or two describing the setting or a paragraph or two.

    Now, I'd like to close with two passage of beautiful "baroque" and "descriptive" prose:
    ...the altar remains, a rough wooden altar backing on a wall of rough-hewn stone. Four walls washed with lime, a door opposite the altar, two small arched windows, on the door a great wooden crucifix, above the crucifix a square window stuffed with a bale of hay, in a corner, on the ground, an old glazed windowframe all broken—that is the chapel for you. Near the altar is nailed a wooden statue of Saint Anne dating from the fifteenth century, the head of baby Jesus was taken off by a Biscay musket. The French, managing to gain control of the chapel for a moment before being dislodged, set fire to it. The flames filled the place; it turned into an oven. The door burned; the floor burned. The wooden Christ did not burn. Fire lapped at his feet, which can now be only seen as blackened stumps, then it stopped. A miracle, according to the people of these parts. The decapitated baby Jesus, though, was not as lucky as Christ. — Victor Hugo, Les Miserables
    Another:

    A legion of horribles, hundreds in number, half naked or clad in costumes attic or biblical or wardrobed out of a fevered dream with the skins of animals and silk finery and pieces of uniform still tracked with the blood of prior owners, coats of slain dragoons, frogged and braided cavalry jackets, one in a stovepipe hat and one with an umbrella and one in white stockings and a bloodstained weddingveil and some in headgear of cranefeathers or rawhide helmets that bore the horns of bull or buffalo and one in a pigeontailed coat worn backwards and otherwise naked and one in the armor of a spanish conquistador, the breastplate and pauldrons deeply dented with old blows of mace or saber done in another country by men whose very bones were dust and many with their braids spliced up with the hair of other beasts until they trailed upon the ground and their horses’ ears and tails worked with bits of brightly colored cloth and one whose horse’s whole head was painted crimson red and all the horsemen’s faces gaudy and grotesque with daubings like a company of mounted clowns, death hilarious, all howling in a barbarous tongue and riding down upon them like a horde from a hell more horrible yet than the brimstone land of Christian reckoning, screeching and yammering and clothed in smoke like those vaporous beings in regions beyond right knowing where the eye wanders and the lip jerks and drools. — Cormac McCarthy, Blood Meridian

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    I quite agree with you!

    A couple of my favourite authors are more minimalist or stripped back in their writing (e.g. Borges, Beckett) but by and large, I adore baroque, lush prose in all it's forms, and I think this emphasis these days on the 'less is more' philosophy has definitely impoverished our writing. It's too narrow, and I get a feeling from a lot of modern aspiring writers that they're solely concerned with conveying information, whilst losing sight of HOW they're conveying that information.

    It also cheapens art somewhat, I mean, would we want all painting to be naturalistic? All film to be documentary-style? All music to be short and concise? All of these techniques are valid in their own right of course and can produce greatness, but I want individual authors to cultivate their individual styles in a way that they see fit, and if that means lush, baroque prose then all the better. Where would literature be without Burton, Browne, De Quincey, Melville, Hawthorne, Proust, Faulkner, etc etc?
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    Quote Originally Posted by Pierre Menard View Post
    I quite agree with you!

    A couple of my favourite authors are more minimalist or stripped back in their writing (e.g. Borges, Beckett) but by and large, I adore baroque, lush prose in all it's forms, and I think this emphasis these days on the 'less is more' philosophy has definitely impoverished our writing. It's too narrow, and I get a feeling from a lot of modern aspiring writers that they're solely concerned with conveying information, whilst losing sight of HOW they're conveying that information.

    It also cheapens art somewhat, I mean, would we want all painting to be naturalistic? All film to be documentary-style? All music to be short and concise? All of these techniques are valid in their own right of course and can produce greatness, but I want individual authors to cultivate their individual styles in a way that they see fit, and if that means lush, baroque prose then all the better. Where would literature be without Burton, Browne, De Quincey, Melville, Hawthorne, Proust, Faulkner, etc etc?
    Thanks for your lovely response. I'd like to note that all the baroque authors you mentioned are wonderful. I'd add Victkr Hugo, Cormac McCarthy, John Milton, John Updike, and Vladimir Nabokov. And of course there are many more great "baroque" stylists, not just among prose writers but among poets as well.

    I would even like to add that I read Nathaniel Hawthorne's preface/sketch "The Old Manse," which opens his story collection MOSSES FROM AN OLD MANSE, the collection with gems like "The Birth Mark," "Feathertop," "Young Goodman Brown," and "Rappaccini's Daughter." Reading "The Old Manse," I'm overwhelmed and enriched by Hawthorne's gorgeous, dense, complex, poetic prose. It reminds me of something from Melville or Nabokov. I am reminded as to why Melville, Nabokov, and Updike (all three being stylists of purple and "baroque") admired Hawthorne so great. It wasn't just his wonderful storytelling that attracted them. It was also his beautiful way with the written word.

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    since brevity is the soul of wit,
    And tediousness the limbs and outward flourishes,
    I will be brief.


    Great topic idea! I've not read any Steiner, but Durrell is one of my favourite authors, and anyone who can write a thoughtful few paragraphs about his prose without using the word lapidary gets a tip of the hat. He also manages to praise a specific literary style and also do it full justice himself, which is not an especially common ability. I'll have to pick him up sometime.

    But that excerpt is not convincing about modern audiences, or writers, being any better or worse than in former times. It's all a bit like hemlines; people are going to get sick of brevity—whether on a limb or elsewhere—and go back to their flourishes. xkcd put together a wonderful satire that partly touches on this topic, which starts out with an anguished lament that "the art of letter-writing is fast dying out" (in 1871, that is). It's too long to post here, but go take a look, it's quite funny. Or, if you want contemporary prose contrary to the less-is-more credo, go work in a bureaucracy.

    Oh, since we're talking "sheer abundance and sensuous variety" and dropping names, I'll have to say it: Rabelais.

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    It is not only in literature that the tendency to simplify is noticeable. It can be seen in many branches of human activity where the individual is being reduced to a cipher. It is a phenomenon that has often been commented on throughout the last century and into the present but it's perhaps understandable that a reaction to writers such as Henry James came to pass.
    W S Maugham, who was an acquaintance of James, made the point that James was like a man who equipped himself with all the paraphernalia for climbing a mountain when setting out to walk up a hill.
    Maugham was a favourite of George Orwell who said that he liked Maugham's ability to tell a story without frills
    I haven't read Les Miserables, and it would be foolish to deny Victor Hugo's greatness as a writer but, in the example given above, there seems to be unnecessary repetition; which may be down to the translation.
    Neither have I read Blood Meridian but the prose as given would seem to smack of self-indulgence which Lawrence Durrell, whom I have read, manages to avoid while being expressive without gilding the lily.

    To my mind, the modernist school got it right notwithstanding the greatness of their predecessors.
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