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    Parts of a Whole

    Your hands
    quivering leaves in the wind
    fingers
    tumbling down my body
    in feathery
    anti-gravitational descents.

    Your lips
    unbury hidden treasures
    liquid fire
    on the edge of your tongue
    convulsing
    volcanic eruptions.

    Your arms
    carry the weight of mountains
    holding all
    of my fissures and fault lines
    in place
    before I fall apart completely.

    Your body
    cartography of scars
    each one
    mesmerized as braille to my touch
    unraveling
    stories I cover within tears.

    Your thighs
    smell of wildwood and deep earth
    an offering
    of primordial warmth
    rooting me
    securely against you.

    Your heart
    a wild bird yearning for flight
    thundering
    with a lion's roar
    purrs
    contently captive in my hands.

    Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before. ~ Edgar Allan Poe

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    Nice ending with the captive heart which, though a part, seems to me to represent the whole.

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    Thank you!

    Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before. ~ Edgar Allan Poe

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