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    Sunday Market

    High tinkle-chime voices announce their arrival:
    The Chinese ladies have come to inspect
    the baker's wares.
    Like bees, like fairy princesses
    they zizz around the buns and baguettes.
    "Blueberry, blueberry," is their buzz;
    no blueberry today, but lemon tarts
    and crumbly croissants
    and heroic loaves
    to feed a whole village.

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    Market places are fun, as is your little poem. The zizz and buzz is just what one should expect. Too bad the blueberry was gone. It is an especially good flavor.
    Perhaps it was just an idle view, or the view as seen by an idle mind.

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    Like bees, like fairy princesses
    they zizz around the buns and baguettes.
    ... Delightful.

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
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