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    whistle

    happyness is a
    whistle in the air
    that indicates
    it is there
    even when it is not fair
    life does not
    care
    because one day
    it will come back and stare
    you made it aware
    Last edited by cacian; 10-18-2015 at 08:56 AM.
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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    I like how you have associated happiness with a "whistle in the air".

    Is there some reason to spell happiness as "happyness"?

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    hi YesNo and thank you for reading
    i spell happyness with a Y because i think it looks better
    you know i believe even words can pruned not just humans haha
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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