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    Angels in Bed

    The flooded sky chose me for the rain
    Let it pour its veins for death,
    Its flesh for my dress,
    But angels don’t die of happiness
    The curse of heaven is dead,
    So is the lady in bed.
    Her world is still, speechless
    But angels tend to die of happiness.

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    Angels in Bed


    The flooded sky chose me for the rain
    Let it pour its veins for death,
    Its flesh for my dress,
    But angels don’t die of happiness
    The curse of heaven is dead,
    So is the lady in bed.
    Her world is still, speechless
    But angels tend to die of happiness.
    Interesting offering; especially L1-L3.

    I need your help in resolving L4 and L8. For me they are contradictory with no resolution in the poem to support the fact.

    All the best.

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
    tailor STATELY
    Last edited by tailor STATELY; 10-10-2015 at 03:46 AM. Reason: format
    tailor

    who am I but a stitch in time
    what if I were to bare my soul
    would you see me origami

    7-8-2015

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