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    Thank you so much, Danik!

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    The Snowflake Collector as ePub

    Hello Again, Friends –

    A little while ago I was able to tell you that we've published The Snowflake Collector as a hardback book with illustrations by Diego Cassia. And for those of you who prefer your reading on a tablet or smartphone, it's now also available as an ePub on the iBooks Store.

    (Obviously, neither the hardback nor the ePub can be entirely free, but the story remains available here and also where it first originated, on my ongoing 'concept narrative', over at http://EDENbyFREI.net/the-snowflake-collector and you can also listen to it for free over on Soundcloud: https://soundcloud.com/edenbyfrei/th...lake-collector)

    Thank you again for all your interest and support: this seriously would not have happened without you!

    Love & Peace
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    The Planet Walk

    Hello All

    I hesitate a bit to link this here, because it's such a different proposition, but still: for those of you who liked The Snowflake Collector, I've started a new story strand on this forum, called, tentatively, The Planet Walk. With a bit of luck and perseverance, it may result in a complete 'Planet Suite', and that's not even such a bad metaphor (even taken in a context of music), because it's not really so much a story as an exploration. So chances are, in all honesty, that if you really liked The Snowflake Collector for all its traditional storytelling characteristics, you may yet loathe The Planet Walk. But what, I wonder, if not for some experimentation, is a forum like this for, so if you're up for something completely different, here it is:

    http://www.online-literature.com/for...he-Planet-Walk

    Thanks for reading & for all your comments and encouragement!

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    FREI

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    Hi, FREI(Sebastian)
    I enjoyed the language flow but I feel that Neptune could be much more neptunian. Itīs still a bit confusing this god/ planet/ human combination.Sometimes he seems to human to me
    The richness of introspective writing IMO, is that it explores the interior world, showing new aspects of it. The danger, that they sometimes negleget the external aspects a bit. In that case the characters tend to look similar, because, after all, it is the same voice that is behind them. That happens even to great authors like Clarice Lispector.
    This planet project looks interesting. It will be more if you differentiate your planet characters, endowing them with their own special qualities, be they astrological, astronomic or all of them together.
    Please donīt go away, the advice is intended to be constructive!
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    Seems I posted this one one a wrong thread, it was meant for "The Planet Walk". Iīll leave it here because I donīt know how you took it. I am afraid I was too incisive.
    "You can always find something better than death."
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    Quote Originally Posted by Danik 2016 View Post
    Seems I posted this one one a wrong thread, it was meant for "The Planet Walk". Iīll leave it here because I donīt know how you took it. I am afraid I was too incisive.
    Not at all, thank you Danik. Your comments are insightful and considered and therefore helpful and welcome. It is a forum, after all, and I appreciate you taking the time to read and sharing your thoughts. And thank you also for your encouragement: it certainly helps too!

    All the very best
    Sebastian

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