cosmic formality

[cacian]

science to realisation
that the stars
are constellation
but not
procrastination
is civilisation
to move around
is part
light
and part
dark
the cosmos almost
no matter what the
spawn
about the morn
to realise
life is born
out form
not storm
that 's dawn
that's gone
no scientist can own
factual or known

[NikolaiI]

I speed-read this at first and I'll come back to read it more carefully later, hehe. Then I'll have a better comment!

[cacian]

Nikolail thank you

[NikolaiI]

To me this speaks to the beauty of spirit and of form, for instance, the word "spawn," which is the only one which is not neutral or entirely positive, to most of us, to which we usually would think with a bit of shock, "what is that?!" but since that is part of life, and part of all life, it is still beautiful and holy.

That's just my impression, and I'm not sure if it's right. But I think, to realize we are the same as all other life, and all life is sacred, that's one of the best ways to restore ourselves..

about the morn
to realise
life is born
out form
not storm

seems to speak to realizations, to me.. and as always, it brings the question, what is life? what are these forms of? what is the essential nature?

which are hidden in your poetry - if I am not mistaken..

and the last lines - strike me as similar to what Dr. Richard Feynman, the brilliant physicist had to say about science, as well as some of Einstein's. Those greats had a humility, and spoke much of the awe of nature.

[cacian]

Nikolail you are a great reader interpreter
I enjoy reading your comments because you take time and care and it shows.

a form is a shape where i assume things just happen around it
in other words the shape comes first and then the apparition of nature afterwords
this is to say it is not random.
everything has a purpose and comes with a mold if you like hence the form
a bit like making jelly or a cake
it has a dish or a mold to hold it in order to make it otherwise it is just ingredients on their own.

[NikolaiI]

oh, thank you.

I also sort of see it all as an elaboration of one single starting idea, or starting point, that is life.
and that we sometimes tend to make it complex, while in reality it is very simple, a single, whole;

i also find it very pleasant that you write about light. since i was a child i noticed,
and have many times come back to -
that life is light.

[cacian]

oh, thank you.

I also sort of see it all as an elaboration of one single starting idea, or starting point, that is life.
and that we sometimes tend to make it complex, while in reality it is very simple, a single, whole;

i also find it very pleasant that you write about light. since i was a child i noticed,
and have many times come back to -
that life is light.

I enjoy writing about the effect of light and life in general.