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    it takes two

    when together
    is under
    the weather
    just go with
    a rather
    ''giving up is never
    to make me takes
    two
    so to forsake
    me
    takes more
    one simply could not afford''
    there is faith in hoard
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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    Wonderful read!!

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    I liked the "faith in hoard" phrase at the end. I had not thought of those two words together before.

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    colb2 and yesNo thank you for reading and comments
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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