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Nice story. Good form. I can't really criticize your writing because it reads pro-style. I'm not much for long intimate inner dialogue but I can't imagine another way to tell a thanksgiving tale. I guess when it comes to writing I got mental ADHD and need it full of action and surprises. But that's just me. Thanks anyway for sharing this. You're a good writer.
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This story is very realistic and we live in detail strongly
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Inexplicably Undiscovered
Please forgive the belaed response but thank you NewSecret and omferas for your nice comments.
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I've only just discovered this thread. Good story, and look forward to reading more.
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