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    Remembrance

    Remembrance


    Quiet now
    Night wind gentle on the killing grounds
    Silent now
    The guns have lost their appetite
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    Leftover life lingers in the yellowed earth
    Pinned on a wire nest
    The half-faced man embraces death as a lover
    and the rats go about their business
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    Old men refill their glasses
    Bend over their maps
    Move the little flags forward
    For the morning
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    The woman looks down at the child
    Fingers the unopened telegram
    The cross carvers are on overtime
    So Mary will have her new dress.


    A poem for the 11th hour of the 11th day of the 11th month when the carnage ended.

    Very few wars can excuse this tidal wave of slaughter.

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    I wondered how someone embraces death like a lover and why would the killing fields be yellow?

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    I wondered how someone embraces death like a lover
    When death is the only relief from excruciating pain
    and would you like to live with half a face?

    Why would the killing fields be yellow?
    Flanders fields were turned by shells into a morass of yellowed mud.
    Last edited by Carousel; 11-11-2014 at 12:08 PM.

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    Another poignant poem Carousel.
    “Neither a lofty degree of intelligence nor imagination nor both together go to the making of genius. Love, love, love, that is the soul of genius.” Mozart

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    We are willing to endure so much.
    Before sunlight can shine through a window, the blinds must be raised - American Proverb

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