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    Empty as hell

    Pour me a cup of that
    The thing thatís made you the way you are
    See I want to be that way
    The way you are
    And you know how
    Pour me a cup of yourself
    Give me a part of you
    Iím empty as hell
    And you have more than enough to spare
    So pour me a cup of something
    Anything
    Iím empty as hell.

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    It occurred to me that one can put "as hell" onto just about anything. Interesting poem and welcome. I guess emptiness is somewhat based on a comparison to those who happen to be around and seem more full.

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    that desperate search to belong, to be "filled". either because you were always empty or because something drained you... connect with this one on many levels. great job!
    Poets Are Damned... But See With The Eyes Of Angels.

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    Good one!

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    I like it.
    "The important thing is not to stop questioning. Curiosity has its' own reason for existing." ~ Albert Einstein
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    I really enjoyed this. Look forward to reading more from you.

    For those who believe,
    no explanation is necessary.
    For those who do not,
    none will suffice.

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