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    Her dirty vagina

    They met in the darkness under the brightest stars,
    when she and her vagina were clean
    He would join hands for her,
    and dance for her,
    and loved her
    the melancholy in her eyes scheduled it all,
    when he accused her for having a dirty vagina
    she felt like a hooker,
    slayed her soul,
    and howled in the trees
    but again,
    she knew she cleaned it everyday

    they kissed like lovers, and walked like love
    but he said she had a dirty vagina
    comatose and buried, she cleaned it everyday,
    she washed it with the agony she had pet
    but he said she had a dirty vagina
    she cried to wash it with tears,
    bled to wash it with blood
    but it was never clean enough
    never deserving enough
    and maybe that's why,
    she died a virgin
    maybe she had a dirty vagina.

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    Ethereal Lactacyd upon me shed, And wave thy silver soap o'er my ****.

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    ? isnt it supposed to be in the section " writing"?

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    There's no introduction for this text. Why is it here?

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    Quote Originally Posted by deborah8315 View Post
    ? isnt it supposed to be in the section " writing"?
    That's what I thought when I saw this post in this section.
    But you, cloudless girl, question of smoke, corn tassel
    You were what the wind was making with illuminated leaves.
    ah, I can say nothing! You were made of everything.

    _Pablo Neruda

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    @sympthygrl
    What is the reason for this thread? There's no reference,no link no explanation, no author. And IMHO no literary value or interest.

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    Oh dear!

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    Next time try soap.

    Just kidding, this belongs in personal poetry.

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