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    My Love Which has Never Existed

    I live, I breathe, but not believe
    I must forget you
    Cause I am alone and your are not

    I am not in your world
    Your love belongs to someone else
    I hope you are happy there

    It will be tough
    It will be difficult
    But I will think about you no more

    I'll take my life as a reward
    I will not let my spirit be lost
    It should remain untouched

    Our duties on the first place
    It is like a rehearsal
    Of your and my strenght

    Once more I will repeat
    I am alone
    But I'll be strong in it

    I won't cry, I don't like it
    I will listen to music
    And pray for the happines of all

    Getting through this
    I'll be with my poems
    And with the love I had

    The love I had in my hands
    And because it has never really existed
    Nobody will be against

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    free this is a sweet poem.
    love recovers quicker then we think.
    I like the 8th stanza
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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    Quote Originally Posted by free View Post
    I live, I breathe, but not believe
    I must forget you
    Cause I am alone and your are not

    I am not in your world
    Your love belongs to someone else
    I hope you are happy there

    It will be tough
    It will be difficult
    But I will think about you no more

    I'll take my life as a reward
    I will not let my spirit be lost
    It should remain untouched

    Our duties on the first place
    It is like a rehearsal
    Of your and my strenght

    Once more I will repeat
    I am alone
    But I'll be strong in it

    I won't cry, I don't like it
    I will listen to music
    And pray for the happines of all

    Getting through this
    I'll be with my poems
    And with the love I had

    The love I had in my hands
    And because it has never really existed
    Nobody will be against
    Lovely writing Free. As they say these things past.

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    Thank you cacian and Tony. I don't like this poem, but I had to write it. I don't really know why, maybe because it has never existed.

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