Thank you for joining us, HCabret, Peter and Dieter.
Thank you for joining us, HCabret, Peter and Dieter.
"The important thing is not to stop questioning. Curiosity has its' own reason for existing." ~ Albert Einstein
"Remember, no matter where you go, there you are." Buckaroo Bonzai "Some people say I done alright for a girl." Melanie Safka
Well, I'm two weeks late, and I really apologize for that. I have really not felt well lately. I couldn't really say I was sick, but I sure was bleh. Anywho, the contest is now officially closed. I will decide on a winner and post that announcement tomorrow.
After that, the winner will announce the topic for the next context and it's length, when it is closed and the new winner, etc. I think this is a really cool idea for a poetry contest, so I hope this takes off. See you tomorrow.
"The important thing is not to stop questioning. Curiosity has its' own reason for existing." ~ Albert Einstein
"Remember, no matter where you go, there you are." Buckaroo Bonzai "Some people say I done alright for a girl." Melanie Safka
To be avant garde means to be innovative or experimental. I'm not sure that any of these poems fit that parameter. How do they stand up, then, as poetry?
Cacian-I like your idea of being a part of something. Your entry is a trifle choppy and rhymie, almost as if that were the most important thing about poetry. I sometimes think you are having us all on-but you would never do that, would you?
Lokasenna-I love the breezy tone your tale of evil tells, Lokasenna. You've created a most fun and evil villain.
Iain Sparrow-Your whole poem is a challenge to an unknown poet. I like your mettle and the last four lines of your poem best.
HCabret-I find yours, in the spirit of well-written poetry, to be rather a strong entry in terms of intent and style that neither subjugates nor overwhelms your ideas. Well done.
PeterL-Ve-r-r-r-y clever. I enjoyed this short but to the point entry, although I might take issue with your last line.
DieterM-Point taken, my friend, point taken.
The winner then, HCabret for" Eight."
Congratulations, H. I hand off the next contest to you.
Last edited by qimissung; 06-01-2014 at 05:55 PM.
"The important thing is not to stop questioning. Curiosity has its' own reason for existing." ~ Albert Einstein
"Remember, no matter where you go, there you are." Buckaroo Bonzai "Some people say I done alright for a girl." Melanie Safka
Congrats, HCabret, and ty, qimissung, for contacting me re. this contest :-)
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qimissung thank you and no I would not have you on. how could I??
what I wrote was genuine.
and
congratulations to HCabret.
it may never try
but when it does it sigh
it is just that
good
it fly
Indeed, well done HCabret! And everyone else as well.
"I should only believe in a God that would know how to dance. And when I saw my devil, I found him serious, thorough, profound, solemn: he was the spirit of gravity- through him all things fall. Not by wrath, but by laughter, do we slay. Come, let us slay the spirit of gravity!" - Nietzsche
Congrats HCabret!.. and thank goodness I didn't win. Winning a poetry contest... well, I could never live that one down.![]()
so who is taking the lead for the next topic??
how does it avant-garde if it does not have a bard??
it may never try
but when it does it sigh
it is just that
good
it fly
Right. We need a bard to avant-garde. Nice way of putting that, cacian. I wonder if there is a runner-up to take the lead?
I was planning to enter the context, but actually didn't, so someone else should continue this.
Does it have to be avant-garde poetry, or could we try a different genre? I'm not a very good judge of the avant-garde, but I'd be very happy to run/judge a contest on another theme - but only if people would like me to? I don't have time at the minute to compose anything, so I wouldn't feel like I was missing out by not competing.
What about a narrative poetry contest?
"I should only believe in a God that would know how to dance. And when I saw my devil, I found him serious, thorough, profound, solemn: he was the spirit of gravity- through him all things fall. Not by wrath, but by laughter, do we slay. Come, let us slay the spirit of gravity!" - Nietzsche
Good ideas, Lokasenna. I have some ideas, but it will be tomorrow before I can finalize them.
"The important thing is not to stop questioning. Curiosity has its' own reason for existing." ~ Albert Einstein
"Remember, no matter where you go, there you are." Buckaroo Bonzai "Some people say I done alright for a girl." Melanie Safka
Following a private discussion with Qimi, we've decided to carry on with the avant-garde theme for now. I'll create a new thread later today for that purpose: the 'Avant-Garde Poetry Contest 2'.
We'll have a narrative poetry contest at some point in the near future - 'narrative' poetry being poetry that tells a story of some kind, though I imagine we'll be able to interpret that as broadly as possible. I hope by the time it rocks around I'll have enough leisure time to compose something (I haven't written anywhere near enough poetry this year...).
"I should only believe in a God that would know how to dance. And when I saw my devil, I found him serious, thorough, profound, solemn: he was the spirit of gravity- through him all things fall. Not by wrath, but by laughter, do we slay. Come, let us slay the spirit of gravity!" - Nietzsche