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    Registered User Delta40's Avatar
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    Oz

    He left and I'm still here
    Some scrawl in the sand
    A plastic tub of
    Ready made coleslaw.

    Reflecting.

    Autumn feels like summer now
    Pass the termite ridden post and
    You can feel the sun shining
    Out of your ears.

    In the outback.

    Ash flakes float through
    The burnt wind
    Here in big sky
    Where we all die.
    Before sunlight can shine through a window, the blinds must be raised - American Proverb

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    I really enjoyed this Delta, but I have to wonder what you mean when you write "you can feel the sun shining out of your ears."

    Is that reference of mood, or a light or otherwise "warm" state of mind?
    "We are animals with problems that no other animal has." - Radam J. Starkiller

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    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
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    I like this.
    "...the ramblings of a narcissistic, self-obsessed, deranged mind."
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