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    Winters bite

    Winters bite

    Slowly gods have changed their minds,
    The sun no longer ours.
    Stolen from us, piercing rays,
    The fuel that feeds the flowers.

    Freakish foes that fall from clouds
    Called cousins of the rain.
    Frozen fangs growing on trees,
    I cry for spring again.

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    A short Winter poem from 2014 I like very much, especially S2:
    "Freakish foes that fall from clouds
    Called cousins of the rain.
    Frozen fangs growing on trees,
    I cry for spring again."

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
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    My favorite line was: "freakish foes that fall from clouds"
    "...the ramblings of a narcissistic, self-obsessed, deranged mind."
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