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    Eye

    A clouded eye
    looks on the ocean
    wavering

    alternately
    bright and dim

    the sun
    admits no shadows
    but you

    on this day
    we walk
    under darkness

    light also
    is this hand
    this mouth

    planting its work
    at my feet
    beneath which

    this earth
    will never move

    never listen

    never know

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    I keep reading this as 'Eve'.
    I am not sure I understand this piece.

    I like this stanza best:

    ''the sun
    admits no shadows
    but you''

    an intriguing read!!
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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