Results 1 to 8 of 8

Thread: The Last Quarter

  1. #1
    Registered User kittypaws's Avatar
    Join Date
    Mar 2010
    Location
    where ever I happen to be at the moment
    Posts
    587
    Blog Entries
    25

    The Last Quarter

    The last quarter.

    As the season wears
    I find myself
    Falling deeper in despair.
    Far away my mind
    And spirit drifts
    Sucked in by
    Solitude and emptiness.
    No noise, no response
    Just barrenness.

    I should have opted
    To have children
    Who would have
    Laughed at my side.
    They could have caused
    Me pain yet they could
    Have brought me smiles.
    But most importantly
    They would had carried love
    In their lunch pails.

    kittypaws
    Everyone finds himself in the world where he belongs. The essential thing is to have a fixed point from which to check its reality now and then.
    Ancient Egyptian Inner Temples

  2. #2
    Registered User Delta40's Avatar
    Join Date
    Dec 2008
    Location
    Fremantle Western Australia
    Posts
    9,902
    Blog Entries
    62
    a real should've could've would've second stanza kitty. The last quarter makes me think the writer is over 75. Is this your intended meaning?
    Before sunlight can shine through a window, the blinds must be raised - American Proverb

  3. #3
    Registered User kittypaws's Avatar
    Join Date
    Mar 2010
    Location
    where ever I happen to be at the moment
    Posts
    587
    Blog Entries
    25
    Thank you for the read and comment Delta. No the writer is not over 75, she is just lonely. This time of year brings much emptiness to those without family and it just reflects how I feel.
    Everyone finds himself in the world where he belongs. The essential thing is to have a fixed point from which to check its reality now and then.
    Ancient Egyptian Inner Temples

  4. #4
    Registered User Delta40's Avatar
    Join Date
    Dec 2008
    Location
    Fremantle Western Australia
    Posts
    9,902
    Blog Entries
    62
    That makes sense too. In oz the last quarter is April to June so that's why the penny didn't drop.
    Before sunlight can shine through a window, the blinds must be raised - American Proverb

  5. #5
    All are at the crossroads qimissung's Avatar
    Join Date
    May 2008
    Location
    Lost in the bell's curve
    Posts
    5,123
    Blog Entries
    66
    I loved your poem, kittypaws, especially the last two lines which I think are brilliant. Yes, there is something about this season that can leave one feeling a bit stranded. You are always welcome at my house, kitty.
    "The important thing is not to stop questioning. Curiosity has its' own reason for existing." ~ Albert Einstein
    "Remember, no matter where you go, there you are." Buckaroo Bonzai
    "Some people say I done alright for a girl." Melanie Safka

  6. #6
    Registered User Delta40's Avatar
    Join Date
    Dec 2008
    Location
    Fremantle Western Australia
    Posts
    9,902
    Blog Entries
    62
    Happy new year kitty! The sky show here is spectacular.
    Before sunlight can shine through a window, the blinds must be raised - American Proverb

  7. #7
    Registered User kittypaws's Avatar
    Join Date
    Mar 2010
    Location
    where ever I happen to be at the moment
    Posts
    587
    Blog Entries
    25
    Quote Originally Posted by qimissung View Post
    I loved your poem, kittypaws, especially the last two lines which I think are brilliant. Yes, there is something about this season that can leave one feeling a bit stranded. You are always welcome at my house, kitty.
    thank you Qim....You are a kind soul and perhaps one day I will take you up on the offer!!!
    Everyone finds himself in the world where he belongs. The essential thing is to have a fixed point from which to check its reality now and then.
    Ancient Egyptian Inner Temples

  8. #8
    Registered User kittypaws's Avatar
    Join Date
    Mar 2010
    Location
    where ever I happen to be at the moment
    Posts
    587
    Blog Entries
    25
    Quote Originally Posted by Delta40 View Post
    Happy new year kitty! The sky show here is spectacular.
    I bet it was Delta! Wish I had been there to see it.
    Happy New Year to you as well dear Friend!

    Kittypaws
    Everyone finds himself in the world where he belongs. The essential thing is to have a fixed point from which to check its reality now and then.
    Ancient Egyptian Inner Temples

Similar Threads

  1. No Quarter
    By Steven Hunley in forum Short Story Sharing
    Replies: 7
    Last Post: 07-07-2018, 12:01 PM
  2. No Quarter
    By Steven Hunley in forum Short Story Sharing
    Replies: 2
    Last Post: 04-03-2011, 06:29 PM
  3. Hi I am Quarter Moon and have just joined this site.
    By Quarter Moon in forum Introductions
    Replies: 0
    Last Post: 03-11-2010, 06:17 PM
  4. Quarter Life Fantasy
    By TSawyer84 in forum Short Story Sharing
    Replies: 0
    Last Post: 12-01-2009, 02:23 PM

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •