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    dungeon ancient

    you are my
    seek
    my
    norhtwest
    my
    peak
    i gaze at you
    and i least
    worry
    about the reek
    the rigours
    the weak,
    to melt
    is honey
    to sugar and feast
    the flower
    buds
    tweet,
    to be
    is a dungeon lit
    without the bits
    the torture
    the kicks
    the tiredness
    the mix,
    pleasure
    fix
    to pastels
    so crisp
    it
    winks,
    it is happy
    it is
    keep
    between
    you
    and I.
    it never felt so
    rabbi
    the idea
    the sigh.
    Last edited by cacian; 11-25-2013 at 07:17 AM.
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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    I take your pardon Cacian to share with you these verses; I find your words are sweet enough to encourage me

    How are my pains?
    It is difficult to see light
    It is difficult to distinguish a loyal friend
    Beside my horror I refused
    I refused the red-handed
    I refused the malice door
    Dozens of streets I crossed alone
    My face was sweated until my bone
    Near the tavern I sigh painfully
    My matter is thin as a cheek of a virgin maiden
    Nothing disturbs me but the darkness
    Nothing I hate but the violation of happiness
    My message is how to avoid the malice
    My message is as a smart pigeon across the world.
    What is the matter value if someone still refusing the peace?
    My country is the Home of Honour And
    Without honour I haven't Home
    MMA

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mohammad Ahmad View Post
    I take your pardon Cacian to share with you these verses; I find your words are sweet enough to encourage me

    How are my pains?
    It is difficult to see light
    It is difficult to distinguish a loyal friend
    Beside my horror I refused
    I refused the red-handed
    I refused the malice door
    Dozens of streets I crossed alone
    My face was sweated until my bone
    Near the tavern I sigh painfully
    My matter is thin as a cheek of a virgin maiden
    Nothing disturbs me but the darkness
    Nothing I hate but the violation of happiness
    My message is how to avoid the malice
    My message is as a smart pigeon across the world.
    What is the matter value if someone still refusing the peace?
    thank you Mohammad. I much like this one best so far. I like the shortness of the sentences. it reads better to me.
    the last line is cool
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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